JeekyWeeb's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mars Landing]

I see you were going for a prospective shot, very nice. What I suggest though is if you can in the future, add a little more focus on the object in front (Some outline maybe?).

All in all I like this piece!

- JamsArts

[Glowing Gunslinger]

I enjoy your creativity mate! That is so cool!

[Striped for the Future]

This is amazing, your structure is superb, the shading is amazing, the lights and their colors are very well made and the fog really gives it a real feel.

Please keep up this amazing work!

-JamsArts

G3ARS responds:

thank you so much I will do so as much as I can> :)

[Tracer]

I love it! My only complaint is that the eye brow to the left looks a little off. Your visor shine is awesome, hair is made nice with a hint of shading and the background is very suiting for the character (Tracer main represent!).

Keep it up mate : )

-JamsArts

RobxSteed responds:

Thank you so much for the feed back! You're right about the eye brow tbh. Idk what happened, I totally slipped up on that one lol.

[The butterfly of my eye...]

Alright I enjoy your idea but I think you can do better! Try working more with structure within the eye (look up some videos on Youtube or anywhere else in a book) and try to also focus on the entire face it's self even though we are supposed to focus on the eye.

In the end, I see what you wanted to do and I can vision you doing better (no pun intended)! I want to see you grow so I am going to follow your page.

Do not feel as if you need to listen to me, it is just some advice so you can take it or leave it.

Good luck mate!

- JamsArts

MikeAmuletKeeper responds:

Ok. Ill try. ... I'm not all good unless I'm on actual paper >.< ....

[Penny Pamplemousse]

Alright I may sound cruel but I am doing this because I care. I see what picture you were going for and I see what you tried to do but I do not think you quite hit the mark you could get. Your structure is not apparent nor is the color colored refined.

I believe you definitely need to work on your hands as well as body structure. Try to practice some structure from Youtube. A good source is Drawing with Jazza, but they're of course many other options.

With that however, I see what you can be. I loved reading the story you put with the character and how you focused on her personality. The character is very adorable, it is just I know you can always improve as I have and will still do so.

Please do not be discouraged from my advice but please try to take what you want to heart and ignore what you want, it is all you at the end. I am going to follow your page because I want to see you become what you can be.

Good luck : )
- JamsArts

[Makoto]

Great job with the character, colors match the eyes and the whole structure is very well put together. Also, she single?

HappyCactusStudios responds:

For now until you get the chance to woo her. Thank you for the review!

[The Legend of Zelda Wind Waker]

Mate, how you put that whole seen together is amazing. Great work!

GrayComics responds:

Thanks so much!

[Link - Feeding time]

So want to try that game. Great job mate.

[Orisa]

Add a background and some shading and you will go way farther. Nice job mate!

JokerYoung responds:

Thanks!